Sunday, March 9, 2014

My first blog post!

Here I am.  I have joined the little community of bloggers in this big wide world.

  I've never really been a huge writer...I've tried to write short stories, but failed.  However, I have found that I truly enjoy writing poems...mostly freestyle free verse poems .  So on the topic of poems, I thought that I would go ahead and share with you one of my most recent freestyle free verse poems. 

The Shadow of the Past is Gone

With every step I took,  another one just like it clicked on the stone cobble way 
Looking behind me something vanished, it looked so much like me...well the old me
Had I continued on that path I walked away from 

Then when I looked back again it stood there making me take a long hard look
And making me feel scared, but also happy at the same time
Here was a person that was haunting me with my past
And making me see what I would have been like had I not changed
What makes me happy is that I made a choice and left what would have been 

As I walked towards it, it turned and vanished into the dark cold night 
And then I turned around and walked the opposite way
Glad that the shadow of the past had vanished
That's where it belongs and that's where I want it to stay

The happy shadows of life




6 comments:

  1. Love it, Abby! Can't wait to see more! :) :D =D =)

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    1. You're the first one to comment!! =) Thank you, Hagen! I love all your different smiles! =D

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  2. Oh Abby i am so happy to see you have started a blog! I can't wait for more adventures from you xx

    Maddy

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    1. Thank you Maddy! I look forward to posting more adventures!

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  3. Wow. Simply wow, the picture is beautiful and stunning and the poem just gives you this feeling of...lost and wistful memories, but happy ones, too.

    I'm sooooo happy to see you started a blog, I cannot wait for more! Love you, girl!

    Love,

    Calamity Rene

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  4. Thank you, Calamity Rene! Love ya to!

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Your comment is an appreciated captured moment. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

Cheers,
Abby